Feedback for Peers Websites

Below is the feedback i gave the other groups for there website first drafts.

Tori Lorent
The image is really clear and sharp and the setup looks extremely professional with the navigation bar at the top.
I think it would look more professional if there wasn’t a personal quote on the home page and maybe if there was a description about the website and the artist.
Try to use a higher variety of images in the gallery. There is 4 in the same location.
Change URL.
Overall a really elegent website.
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Stellato
First thoughts aren't great. You have some really nice photos on the home page however the slide show is way too fast and the images are all different sizes. It makes my eyes hurt. The slideshow will work better if it is a lot slower.
Entrance to website isn’t obvious. Didn’t even see the link in the corner.
On entrance to the website the layout is quite chaotic however the images and text complement each other nicely.
The layout of the gallery needs improving. They're all different sizes and are not coherent.
Overall, it's just a little work on layout and it will be really good!
3

Luella
The tiled background is an eye sore. The boxes are a good idea however they start halfway down the home page so should be adjusted.
I really like the navigation bar at the top with the logo.
Overall, change the background and sort out the layout. Has potential though!
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Sempa
There is a big pace on the home page. I scrolled down and was very confused.
Create a box to put the text in. The images are poor as well.
Lots of unfinished pages.
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Ivory
Brilliant modern looking opening image.
The text is quite hard to read at the bottom of the home page.
The amazon, itunes, google boxes are all different sizes and different size spaces apart from each other.
The title on the news page is too far to the left.
Overall, the layout is lovely and detail of text is fabulous.

Heidi
I don't like the home page image. Heidi is out of focus which isn’t great as she should be the focal point.
Bio has a good amount of information.
The photos move too slowly and you can speed them up of skip pictures.
I don't like the blog style layout. I prefer seperate pages.
Love the title at the top and the nav bar.
Overall, think about the images you use.
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MYA
I like the funky transition as you scroll.
Home page is nice. You might want to think about giving a bit of information about the artist.
On the about me part. You could do it in third person as it might look more professional.
I prefer the separate pages rather than the blog style layout. But i guess that is just personal preference.
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Avenue
3 very similar sections.
They arent hi res images. Learn what hi res means
Some useless boxes. Go to contact.

St. Dizier
The navigation bar is too small, the words are too small.
The latest news is really cool.
I love how the text is organised so it looks hand written.
The layout is really good. I like the separate pages rather than the blog style.
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